Twilight Challenge


Here is the home base of my Twilight Challenge.  Basically, I rewrite Twilight by cutting out the extra trimming and turn this over wordy mess into the book it could be.  Kind of like P90X destroys all fat I plan to give this book a diet.  This is based on the blog post from William.  God help us.

What I have discovered is Meyer can be funny.  With proper tweaking Bella can be likable.  Still a Sue but not as angsty.  I am trying to keep her consistent in how she reacts and feels.

I will eventually rename the characters for that whole copy-rite thing, but the purpose is not to sell and make a profit.  This is purely to see what Twilight can do under the right amount of editing using the material already there.

This is not easy, but comments will help.  Feel free to make suggestions and point out plot holes.

Dusk Chapters

Chapter 1 – First Sight
Chapter 2 – Open Book
Chapter 3 – Phenomenon
Chapter 4 – Invitations
Chapter 5 – Blood Type
Chapter 6 – Scary Stories
Chapter 7 – Questions
Chapter 8 – Port Angeles
Chapter 9 – Confrontations
Chapter 10 – Interrogations
Chapter 11 – Complications
Chapter 12 – The Cullens
Chapter 13 – Visitors
Chapter 14 – Goodbyes
Chapter 15 – Hide and Seek
Chapter 16 – An Impasse
Chapter 17 – Consequences

Dark Moon Chapters

Chapter 1 –
Chapter 2 –
Chapter 3 –

Helpful Reading

How to Tell if you are in an Abusive Relationship

  1. May 2, 2012 at 1:25 PM

    As of 1:24 PM on May 2nd there are only 17 Chapters for Dusk. Each post of course will show the new stats versus the original and I will have a recap post. Comments are welcome! Also please point out the stupid stuff I may have missed and what explinations were missing before.

  2. July 24, 2012 at 11:10 AM

    As of July 24 anything related to Twilight will be password protected. I do not wish to be in violation of copyrite nor do I want to delete the posts. So now there is a password.

    • Adrianna
      August 22, 2012 at 2:04 AM

      Wait. How will we read it then??! (Unless the password has already been given out and I’m being my slow, usual self?)

      • August 22, 2012 at 9:37 AM

        JUst ask on Twitter and I can DM it to you. I just don’t want someone who is going to give me crap about the books to read them and then I end up in legal trouble. You can find me @jj_randolph

  3. Anna
    March 29, 2013 at 9:08 PM

    Um wouldn’t be the same as a fanfic? As long as you clearly state you don’t own anything and aren’t trying to profit out of anything…I am not sure how there could be any legal trouble?

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